The celestial smile

A delightful walk on a clear summer night !  _________________________________________________________

It’s a tender night

The air cool and soft

I catch a brilliant smile;

My stride going slow

Enjoying the glow

I instantly smile back ;

He feels so shy

Disturbed by the pry

Hides behind the clouds;

 He looks so adorable

The beauty undefinable

As he naughtily peeps back.


15 Responses

  1. Never saw the moon in that light. Just goes to show how interesting a poet’s perspective can b

  2. I felt that way as I watched the moon that night. It was really a bright and beautiful smile out there!

  3. The mischievous moon is peeking at you! Such a nice fancy, Hema. Thank you!


  4. the imagery is stunning on this one.
    well done.

    Happy Rally.

  5. A very charming poem =)

  6. @ Jingle – Thanks for the kind words.

    @mindlovemisery – Thank you 🙂

  7. beautiful imagery again! u capture nature brilliantly! glad i came to this blog! 🙂

  8. I like the format and flow. Is there a reason the first stanza doesn’t follow the same rhyme scheme?

  9. This is so refreshing, I simply loved the last stanza it has such charm. 5 stars:)

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